Grey clouds loom above

Sahansa Udawatta (Year 10) 
Inspiration artwork: Alia Haider’s Yaadon Ka Dher (Bundle of Memories) and Diyar-e-Goom (Lost Land), as well as the events associated with the fall of Kabul in 2021

Grey clouds loom above,

Closing in on Kabul.

Below, a figure draped in a burka,

Struggles beneath the strength of a man.

The Earth, her pit of fate,

Bars on her eyes, dirt on her hands,

Rocks thud against her skull,

Taking away the pain of living.

Rotating blades from the West cut the air of tension,

Pushing  back the curtain of darkness,

Bringing peace.

Clear skies cultivate new experiences,

A move from inside to outside.

Burkas radiant in the sunlight,

Neon with floral patterns, her inner beauty revealed,

Comforting her as she steps into her own,

Discovering who she is for herself.

Camouflaged uniforms disappear from view,

Back to the warm embrace of home.

The heart of society bleeds like a ruptured vein,

The sound of death, a knock on every door,

As we traitors clench our jaws,

Praying not to be a part

Of the masterpiece, they call art.

Drugged by their lies, consumed by hope,

We wait, our bodies moulded with trauma.

20 years and a trillion dollars,

Only to have our leaders flee,

And our nation theirs without a fight.

Our country, absorbed in anarchy,

Tidal waves of people lining airports,

Tears glistening their wide-eyed faces

As they are pushed along the burning tarmac,

Praying for a ticket to the future.

Clutching children, they clamber,

As the planes take off amidst the theatre of war,

Leaving behind others to experience more

Wrath, more pain.

Yet somehow holding on to the promises of the powerful.

The white flag flies ferociously

Above a people who tremble

In its shadow.


Sahansa Udawatta is 15 years old and lives in Hobart. She is a reading enthusiast who enjoys spending time with her friends, family and two German shepherd puppies, Bear and Ryder. Her interests include travelling, swimming and staying in tune with current events.

The Art2Words Writing Prize is an annual writing competition at The Friends’ School. Read the full list of short-listed and winning entries here

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